FsPassenger Documentation

[wolfc]

The documentation appears to be in place:
http://www.fspassengers.com/?action=down...rchtype=Id

It's looking good .

Now only a couple of to go... can't wait. Keep it guys.

[Deacon]

May I ask where you found this link?

[DanSteph]

it was posted by one guy in another thread, also a tester posted the doc but
I choosed to allow this upload to show (upload appear only after I set manually a flag)

So I'm aware that this doc is available... I'll send it also soon when I'll send the next press
release, so no harm here.


Dan

[mach_one_man]

Hello all, I have been following FsPassengers for a few weeks now, well my brother (Robjos) has been following it for longer but I have
recently got quite excited about the release. I just thought I would sign up to the forums to leave a few comments e.t.c.

Just to point out one thing, in the documentation I found a spelling error of "wich" its just in the last sentence of the documentation. I know
Dan that you want this to be a perfect product so I thought after noticing it that I should highlight this tiny error which you may feel needs
correcting - if it hasn't been done already.

[pagir]

mach_one_man... I see that your have read the manual from the first word to the last... You're ready for FsP!!!


Pagir

[DanSteph]

mach_one_man wrote:
Just to point out one thing, in the documentation I found a spelling error of "wich" its just in the last sentence of the
documentation. I know
Dan that you want this to be a perfect product so I thought after noticing it that I should highlight this tiny error which you may feel needs
correcting - if it hasn't been done already.

Thanks don't hesitate to mail me if you find error...

Dan

[mach_one_man]

Pagir, I just noticed that on a quick read through last night, I have now read the the first 1/3rd in detail and have found a few more things
that I think may need correcting. I don't actually know if I am fully correct on these, so could someone else check and clarify before they
are changed in the manual. Thats why I posted this here instead of emailing it directly to Dan.

- Page 2 - second to last line - There is a space before this line starts, im not sure if it is meant to be here and personally would think it
looks neater if left out.

- Page 4 - near the start of the page - It says "your flight data, passengers' opinion, mistakes, failures" and I think that "passengers'
opinion should be "passengers' opinions" as I think this is better English

- Page 6 - half way down, Career mode section - It says "You start with low rank that are only able to fly" when this I think should be "You
start with a low rank and are only able to fly"

- Page 7 - five lines down - It says "maximum crash allowed" when I think this should be "maximum crashes allowed"

This is all I have done really so far as I havn't read it thoroughly cover to cover. If I get round to it sometime today I will post any other tiny
errors that I think could be changed, but as I said before I don't know that I will find time to do it


I know that all of these are only tiny errors however once again, perfection is what I know Dan and the beta testers are looking for :-)

Anyway, I hope that I have not asked anything to be changed that would make it incorrect.

[Giorgio]

Dan,

is this documentation final enough to start the Italian translation I had promised you? Or should I wait for the final release?

Giorgio

[DanSteph]

Giorgio wrote:
is this documentation final enough to start the Italian translation I had promised you? Or should I wait for the final release?
Giorgio

Not yet, somes people are still making somes corrections...
Also when it will be okay I'll post the word document so it will be far
more easy for people to translate.

Dan

[Giorgio]

Ok, Dan, I'll warm my internal translation engine in the meantime! ^_^

Giorgio